Screenwriting

When I went to consult Mr. Robin about my drafted screenplay today, I was all nervous and terrified that it would be rejected.

Cause:

The tutors pointed out the two key problems in my story last week during tutorial - which is the difficulty to show the size of the unmatched lingerie, and the boobs enlargement massage oil solution. It was hard for audiences to believe that the main actress would be satisfied with the outcome.

So, my drafted screenplay hasn't have much improvement from my synopsis, other than writing out the details of the story.

I was pretty glad that I consulted Mr. Robin. We worked out a couple of extra ideas in the story to make it more interesting and feasible.
And most importantly, we got rid of the quite-dumb-boobs-enlargement-oil part, and replace it with another event.

Screenwriting isn't an once-complete kind of writing. It REALLY requires multiple times of editing, editing and editing to enhance the quality of the story and improve details.

It took me long enough to come out with this 5 minutes story... I wonder how long those auteurs and screenwriters took to complete their 90 minutes films...